oh dear... upon analisis of the video at 17 seconds of the video (about

10 seconds into the routine) there was a collison between maria and tony which caused the butterfly effect for the rest of the show, if we started again we would of have had a succesfull show and would have been in contesion this was possibly due to this where they are suposed to be in a mirrored action which it did do correctly every other test when we were troubleshooting act 1 which due to the jerky nature of the action

apears to be a error within the code where it
did this ---------------------------->>
NOOOOOO that's not right silleh Mindstorms program!!!!
This would have been countered if he started slightly further to the stage right. since we hadn't got the right turn calibration right so they would have been fixed by the planned correction just before act 2 to counter a inaccuaracy in the truning we ran out of time to correct.
The whole presentation felt dislodged from me, I was sitting in the audience monitoring the camera watching this bizzaro world version of our week long pride and joy. on a journey to self destruction.Its not so much of a disappointment that it all went chaotic it was almost exciting unexpected and not the same routine that we had repetitively repeated with repeatedly repeated repetition. pity it wasn't as articulate and precise as the one we originally concocted.
We are going to get to film it on Tuesday or Wednesday which should be fun. more so than the actual show.
onto a crit of the other groups in chronological order
Swan lake: the most stand out feature of the swan lake dance was the swan character (aren't swans meant to be white though not brown?) It would spin smoothly and raise its wings they. had a fairly consistent show although they had a fairly strong willed set of lemming NxT but get extra points for being the other group who created a stage.
Black grace: set off with video sequence that quickly suffered from PowerPoint syndrome. and then they had a
short dance sequence which was technically good but didn't really seem to represent a week of work. they used chalk on the floor to make trails hopefully this wasn't meant to be symbolic since on the first attempt it left a large phallic shape on the floor.
Stomp: this is the most difficult dance to critique. the choice to have robotic pails was sheer cute and brilliant, but the retro futuristic set felt like a tacky abomination to stomp. a robotic junkyard that looks like some kid from the 80's paper-mache representation of futuristic tecnology? the actual sound didn't seem calculated it was just a series rattles, for such a great source material the end product seemed incomplete.
Overall I enjoyed the breif, it had a large amount of designing things problem solving and teamwork. from a seemingly dificult task with a plethra of options we created order.
we created choreographed motion.We pushed for the most ambitious and precise dance routine with three individual "dancers" and we succeded only to be thrown by two arrows.
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